I did it.
My first one ever.
Not a paragraph, not a character sketch, not amputated dialogue, but a whole story. One thousand four hundred fifty five words worth.
It's rough I know, it's still in first draft. It's simplistic, there's undeveloped characters, sparse dialogue, inconsistencies, mixed up tenses, bad grammar, probably a million holes and it doesn't have a title, but I don't care. It may have a face only a mother would love, but this is huge for me. I've never finished a piece of fiction before.
Thank you 5g33k for being such a fucking nag of a muse, couldn't have done it without you Genius.
Read the piece here.
And yes, I want to know what you think. Pat on the head or evisceration, I welcome all feedback.
*July09/08 edit* Have since removed the link for some official purposes. Thanks for all the feedback guys, it's been taken in to consideration for the final edit.